Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Commentary on Streaking

Streaking is a kind of action where people taking off clothes and running naked through the public. Try to imagine that students from Raffles Institution strip themselves and running naked along the Bishan city, would that be too eye catching or irritating? You can't actually imagine that students with such high integrity strip themselves and run along the streets in Bishan, wouldn't people who is driving will actually be out of focus, lose control of their vehicles and causes accident, it is very horrible. So, I think that streaking should be banned and be considered as a crime. Although we actually have the rights to express our freedom and expression of maybe happiness or emotional feelings, we can't actually strip and run naked because it will irritate the people around you.

For Asian country like singapore, our culture is not that open-minded because we still have those traditional thinking inside our mind. Striping in the public is some sort of like a rude act because we should't actually expose our body in the public. According to our traditional thinking, we sort think that striping is a rude act and should be ban. This actually will lower down one's dignity and gain less respect from people.

Besides that, streaking is an act which reflects the people of that particular country. When a particular people in Singapore streaks on the streets of tourists attraction, tourists from other country may have a bad impression on Singapore. This will affect the name of the particular country and thus affects it's economy on tourism because tourists won't actually go to a country where people streak in the public.

Streaking is considered a rude act which will reflect on yourself and your country. Police starts to actually consider this act as a crime. Streaking is an offensive and irritating act if u do it in the public. It will cause a lot of unwanted accidents. So, streaking should be banned.

2 comments:

  1. 1) The commentary needs to be longer, about 300-500 words in length. Please have it ready by the next lesson (Monday) - it will be used in class.

    2) I assume you're not done yet, and this is still your introduction. You have not yet made your stand though, you need to create an opinion (Do you support streaking? Should it be banned? Should the students have been punished? Something like that).

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  2. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Fail!!!!!

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